And the verdict is…
April 25, 2009
Emotional outburst, followed by mildly brutal interrogation.
It serves as a good turning point for him as he emerges from the turmoil and confusion of the beginning of the story and begins acting as a full hero. Not bad.
Not great, either. It will need polishing, if not re-envisioning. But it is exciting, and it moves the story in the right direction, so I call it a win.
Entry Filed under: writing. Tags: tension, hero, conflict, plot point, development.
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Merrilee Faber | April 25, 2009 at 2:38 am
I’ll be more interested in our hero’s mental state afterwards. That will speak volumes about him as a person
Bring it on!